Great stuff. Clean sound. I would just try to stray away from Nexus presets :)
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Love the sounds man. Actually quite beautiful. I can agree that the percussion does effect the beautiful mood at first set by the track. Not exactly in a bad way, but it does change the mood. I think there are other ways you could have taken the track to keep the beauty yet still accelerate the track.
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This is actually really good especially for a first submission! Keep up the good work.
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